A human life has five major stages and different roles to play over in every phase of life. These phases includes child teenager, middle age, elders and old ones. Out of which a teenager is considered as one of the most energetic and enthusiastic stage of life. Therefore, a set of people and I opine that a person should utilize his young age in helping others selflessly.
There are a plethora of features of this age which shows that a teenagers are capable of completing their duties, simultaneously, for their family and nation. The first and the foremost is, it is one of the prominent phase of learning and applying the same practically. If a youngster will spend his leisure time in working with a NGO or any other welfare club, he would be able to comprehend the financial and real condition of his nation well, which could be helpful for him in his theoretical studies. Secondly, if a teenager will keep himself engross with such noble causes then there are less chances that they would go astray. They will rather contribute to the betterment of themselves, their family and their society or regions.
Further reinforcing my viewpoint, a young age is an age of no liability. One just have to concentrate over his studies. Food and other amenities are usually provided by other earning family members. Hence, a teenager can easily participate in social works volunteerly and that too for no or low money. Moreover, a young person can do much more physical work than that of an elder one. Therefore, a nation will always be in need of such vigorous efforts of its country people. In addition to this, a young person can travel around at different places without giving any botheration to any of his family member as no one, at this stage, is suppose to be dependent on him financially. Therefore, they can make more in less time.
To recapitulate, it can be said that the young age of a person is like a golden chance for him to utilize his skills and knowledge in a better way. There is the age where one's future is shaped and a practical experience during this age, in any field, will definitely accumulate to his intellectual power while benefiting various parts of his home country. Everyone should try to give his best, while young, to glorify nation's pride and honor.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'include'.
Suggestion: include
...er in every phase of life. These phases includes child teenager, middle age, elders and ...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a teenager' or simply 'teenagers'?
Suggestion: a teenager; teenagers
...f features of this age which shows that a teenagers are capable of completing their duties,...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... spend his leisure time in working with a NGO or any other welfare club, he would...
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Line 3, column 594, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...s with such noble causes then there are less chances that they would go astray. They...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...family and their society or regions. Further reinforcing my viewpoint, a young age i...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...cial works volunteerly and that too for no or low money. Moreover, a young person ...
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Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...ily member as no one, at this stage, is suppose to be dependent on him financially. The...
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Line 5, column 639, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...ily member as no one, at this stage, is suppose to be dependent on him financially. The...
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Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...in a better way. There is the age where ones future is shaped and a practical experi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72568578554 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65957498412 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558603491272 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2952239492 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.75 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.05 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156138766822 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463829063252 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397703501695 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093119471813 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505550466551 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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