Television is one of the dominant gift of science, which is used widely in all parts of the world as a great source of information and entertainment. Mostly people use to watch television in their leisure time and learn a lot from it while relaxing. A television has a power to induce something in human's brain. Therefore, it would be easy for it to impact a person or a culture of any society. However, the nature of those effects are still in question being negative or positive.
To begin with, the positive influence, a television allows a person to see the culture and traditions of different places while sitting at his home place. This would promote the exchange of cultures. One can opt or adopt another culture for his betterment or for learning purposes. Secondly, a person is able to know about the latest updates in the field of fashion, technology, arts, politics, sports and several others through television. It makes a man more prepared and bold to face the world around him. A person can become up to date with the latest progressions of the society.
On the other hand, an army of people thinks that the youngsters, being vulnerable, start following the trends shown in television serials or movies. It is true to say so but there is no harm in following the latest fashion. Rather it adds to one's style of getting dressed and manners to wear ethically. After all, following western clothing is not a crime and it does not even hurt the heritage of traditional culture by any means.
Moreover, with the advancement of technology there are a variety of channels, in the market, being aired on television these days. The religious channels like Sanskar, Aastha, Prerna and various others promotes the traditional values, moral lessons and importance of prayers. Also, there are various other regional channels that can interests a person towards his native culture.
To recapitulate, the television does not effect the culture of the society negatively in any way. The children or teenagers ate the responsibility of their wardens first. They need to keep a check on usage of media by their weans. The moral values should be inculcated in any person from his grassroots level only. The other advancements of life like Television or Technology should not be blamed to cover up the poor upbringing of an individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, after all, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89924433249 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7699815655 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556675062972 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1004299016 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5652173913 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2608695652 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21739130435 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146730919045 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408161064217 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468243771829 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808560188995 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395141711966 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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