Some people think that telling the trust is not always essential. It is necessary to tell lies sometime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some advocate that in not all situations, people find it necessary to tell the true stories and lies should be told in some circumstances. In my opinion, I completely agree with this idea for the following reasons.
There are several reasons why it is more sensible for most people not to deliver the truth. The first justification is that for amusement purposes, comedians can make up fake stories to bring people laughter. To be specific, these people are likely to overstate facts and do unusual something including wearing children’s clothes or clowns in their imaginary stories, enable audiences to relieve from stress and regain their energy for next working days. Another explanation is that telling not completely truth stories can be considered a way to establish a friendship. On typical example is that if people want to make acquaintances with someone they see for the first time and do not know how to start conversations, they would need break barriers between them through telling jokes to make their counterparts feel comfortable to have talks with them.
Telling lies in some cases also brings benefits for listeners. One significant reason is that this action can save lives and give hope for listeners. Many patients, for instance, suffering from life-threaten diseases including cancers often receives encouragement from doctors which says that they will be certainly recovered from their illness. Such emotional assistance from these trustworthy ones can be used as a placebo to help these patients feel optimistic, thereby participating in treatment activities actively. Another reason is that many warm-hearted teachers find it possible to exaggerate students’ performances to help them gain confidence. Without these white lies, these pupils cannot get motivated to try harder.
In conclusion, it is my contention that people can take advantage of fake stories for entertainment and making friends and in some special situations, white lies can be delivered for the sake of listeners.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42271293375 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00525468017 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608832807571 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5582451692 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.785714286 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142362080563 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057005662577 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705540229296 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10903792331 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668743314113 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.