Environmental problems are serious many countries. It means that the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree on this hypothesis.
Environment-related issues are getting more and more serious. Some people advocate the only effective way to protect the environment is to reply on international collaboration between nations whereas it is my contention is that there are other alternative solutions to tackle this issue.
It is sensible that nations worldwide should join forces and make efforts to address environmental issues for several underlying reasons. The first justification is that developed nations can share experiences and environmentally friendly technologies to help each other to deal with environmental pollution. In fact, many developing nations have the shortage of budget or green technology, making it impossible for them to clean contaminated water and air or prevent chemicals from factories from releasing into rivers and lakes. Another reason is that all nations can together impose strict regulations on environmental standards including controlling and limiting the amount of greenhouse gas and chemicals allowed to enter atmosphere. It is a well-known fact that people from any places on the earth share the same natural resources such as air and water, which means that the pollution or destructions of natural habitats in one nation can affect neighboring nations as well as the rest of world.
However, there are much better methods which deserve the topmost attention of the government and people who care about the environment. The first one is to local governments is likely to organize green campaigns annually to cope with environmental issues. In Vietnam, many youngsters who love nature have a tendency to participate in green campaigns that helps plant more trees in places where there used to be forests and collect garages on streets near where they live. Another solution is to at schools, professors can give lessons to pupils about how important the environment is for their lives, thereby raising their awareness of environmental conservation.
In conclusion, apart from advantages of cooperating between nations in environmental protection, there are more effective ways to make sure that the most desirable results are achieved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, well, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56534954407 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14117820087 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592705167173 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4639026717 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.583333333 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12835489969 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478191622282 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375936325407 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861692623872 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506895040547 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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