Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that actions by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
These years, global climate change becomes a concerned phenomenon. There are a lot of solutions proposed. One
of them is emphasizing the importance of individuals’ actions in preventing it. However, other people suppose that
only government and large businesses’ actions can make a difference. This essay is going to discuss about both
these views and give other different opinion.
Let us begin by looking at how essential individuals’ role is in the society as well as in this problem. World is a huge combination of more than seven billions people. When everyone does something good for the environment such as
collecting trash, saving the electricity and planting tree, global climate change can be improved considerably. In
addition, if everybody takes their actions into consideration before carrying out, human will be able to defend this
situation. For instance, people aware of what consequences they will bring to the Earth when they cut down tree, burn
the coals or destroy the forest, they may stop doing them.
On the other hand, there is something which is only done by government and large businesses. Making global climate
change decrease dramatically is not as easy as a piece of cake. This involves in both technology and strategy. It
means to obligating a large factory not to release the amount of CO2 over the suitable level, we need helps from
government, authorities and powerful people. Moreover, they are able to invest in modern technology and make it
worldwide like using solar panels in every houses all over the world. Building enormous labs for scientists to research
methods to reduce this problem is also necessary. A normal citizen is absolutely unable to do these things. This is the
reason why we need government and large businesses to make a difference.
We cannot deny that the grass is not always green on the other sides. A problem can be solved effectively only when
everyone contribute together. I suppose the best solution for global climate change is combining power of both
government and citizens. Large businesses should launch some vital campaigns such as Earth Hour, Green Day and
Plating Trees projects. Then individuals will be able to join and make changes. Furthermore, government needs to
create new law which is heavily punished anyone poaching or deforesting. Together we can change.
To sum up, everyone plays a key part in the world. Both individuals and government all need to aware of our
responsibilities for the Earth. Let us create a block of solidarity and make global climate change disappear.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 24, column 49, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'poaches'.
Suggestion: poaches
...ew law which is heavily punished anyone poaching or deforesting. Together we can change....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, i suppose, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2202.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24285714286 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94313066998 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564285714286 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2591585783 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6428571429 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326324071558 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784825481088 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806580014711 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865497918943 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763478706613 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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