Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The noise is becoming one of a part of so many conference all over the world and the noise pollution is the main topic of the hottest problems in modern life.
people think that it should be keeped as low as possible because of these reasons. Firstly, a research from traffic jams at urbanization, there are variety sounds from vehicles, music is played for promotion and they make it too noisy create noise pollution. Therefore, they distract other people from their own work in very early morning, they can be result in dangerous accident. Secondly, experts show that to live in a noisy life more often, brain can be not only leaded to diseases but also ruined. Thereby, it is necessary for government provide to control the noise.
Besides, others think that they could make as much noise as they want although sometimes they confuse it. As known that big sound can get attention from people come across, many store use this way to raise customers and revenue. Base on habits, some people enjoy listening to music in high volume instead of headphone so it make live too noisy.
However, in my opinion, environment should be protected overall include from noise pollution. Private life without noisy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88834951456 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39979203077 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660194174757 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0267973204 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5454545455 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32283870131 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106990659358 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104187310582 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162155427516 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980453043385 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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