Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion
People have many different views about noise. Some people think that we should have some essential measures to reduce noise due to its negative impacts, while others think that there is no rule in making noise, so we can make noise as much as we want. I personally believe that both views have particular reasons about noise.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people like to make noise. Firstly, many people feel comfortable and concentrate on some various activities such as working and entertaining. For example, some of the people usually relax by listening music with the maximum volume of speakers to enjoy their favourite songs after a hard-working day even though they know, by doing this, it could disturb next-door neighbours. Secondly, some people think that noise is a part of the industrialisation and the modernisation processes, it, therefore, could not be avoided. Most of the urban citizens were perhaps familiar with traffic noise. Thus, they may argue that there is no reason to limit noise.
On the other hand, it could be beneficial in some ways if we have some strict controls about noise. Living in a place with too much noise could lead to some harmful impacts to their health. Some of my friends told me that they had no healthy sleep because of intrusive sounds from a nearby factory. If this situation lasts for a long time, it will lead to a deterioration in their mental and physical health. In addition, the productive of work can be reduced as a consequence of noise. Many workers complain that they cannot concentrate on their tasks because of constant noise from vehicles in the street.
In conclusion, it seems to me noise should be diminished to have a better life, even though some people insist on making a lot of noise without consideration for others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212827988338 0.247107183377 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.145772594752 0.155533422707 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0903790087464 0.0946595960268 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0408163265306 0.0501214627716 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.064139941691 0.0437548338989 147% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.163265306122 0.122226691241 134% => OK
Participles: 0.0291545189504 0.0403226058552 72% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64263609265 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0291545189504 0.0326793684256 89% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0991253644315 0.0861772015684 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0320699708455 0.021408717616 150% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00291545189504 0.011925033212 24% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1811.0 1933.35771543 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 316.048096192 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86084142395 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326860841424 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.220064724919 0.28420135186 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142394822006 0.203846283523 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0938511326861 0.137316102897 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64263609265 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550161812298 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 57.8299309336 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3125 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1843710887 49.517814964 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.1875 127.492653851 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9375 0.814263465372 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 41.3189724919 49.1944974215 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.61627906977 1.69124875643 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414608725905 0.332605444948 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0764557025706 0.102741220458 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0480093114294 0.0668466124924 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.505165647394 0.534860350844 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175791226326 0.148594505496 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152948919832 0.134430193775 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859260353753 0.0742795772207 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.308966928673 0.324371583561 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0523051430226 0.0638462369009 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276354852441 0.228012699653 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103741958054 0.058150111329 178% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.