Some people think that work is the most important thing of people’s life. Without a successful career, life become meaningless
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that succeeding at work is the most critical object and plays a central role in a meaningful life. This essay disagree profoundly with that statement because life is full of color, yet aspects perceived by each individual and having a stable career is not gravitated by all human beings at all.
Human perception toward a fulfilling life is very different. Many hightlight the importance of work performances for the prosperity and famous, so they are only allured by successful workers and consider it to be the sole object in life. But there are many people who think differently, and that maintaining a healthy lifestyle and to be knowledgeable is what the purposes of life. For example, survey showed that having a demanding career 6 out 10 factors determined a happy life, meaning that there are other factors shaping people thinking.
A wealthy and famous career does not the only determinant of a blissful life. To be more specific, life is not only about trying to prosper, or being extremely productive at workplaces, but also how well we are judged by society. It will be nothing as a self-serving goal if there is no one surrounding and supporting despite being at the peak of a career. For example, BBC reported that 72% of people who play managerial roles said that they feel less joyful and happy than their subordinates.
In conclusion, a fulfiling and blissful life does not mean to be successful at workplace because it is a matter of opinion and that being succeed is only one of so many factors.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81439393939 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8309801239 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.016525512 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.545454545 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23540805017 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979134149838 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490767834127 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144109587662 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725539830836 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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