Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
It is believed that zoos are all wicked places, and they should be shut down. Others argued that they can help support the protection of wild species. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why I am more inclined towards the latter.
On one hand, zoos keep animals in artificial environments. They are kept in cages or have limited space, and they also will lose the freedom to hunt for food. They will eventually rely on humans and will not be able to make a decision by themselves. Therefore, some people thought that zoos are unethical since zoos exhibit animals with the aim of making money. Not only this, if the prime reason of zoos is to protect animals, this could be done in other environments such as wildlife parks where the animals have more freedom.
On the other hand, zoos play an important role in wildlife conservation as they can help to protect endangered ones. Zoos allow scientists to study animals and their behaviour in order to understand them more and help them when they are hurt or in need of something. Moreover, zoos are educational yet interesting and fun at the same time. This seems the most effective way to give information to people about all kinds of faunas to encourage them to protect these creatures.
In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that it is better for wild animals to live in zoos due to the fact that it is more crucial to save the species that are at risk of extinction. However, people should make a zoo like a second home to them because humans have no right to use these animals for entertainment and profit.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62372881356 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48589008727 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562711864407 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8393415411 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4285714286 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321290614313 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112484687318 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690171578828 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197346759622 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374821844035 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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