Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In this day and age, it is hotly debated whether keeping wild animals in zoos is brutal. Although the argument that animals can be completely protected in zoos is acceptable, I strongly believe that zoos are not an appropriate home for them.
It is undeniable that zoos are always a safe place for wild faunas. Animals are provided with sufficient food and health care when they are in zoos since the authority prioritize spending budgets on hiring professional animal caretakers to take care of animals every day. This gives rise to a better life condition for wild faunas, compared to that when they are in nature. Moreover, animals outside zoos can be risk being preyed and killed by hunters, which is attributed to no certain protection measures for them.
Regardless of the above reasons, I think animals should not be caged in zoos. First and foremost, animals in zoos are taken advantage of for recreational purposes, rather than being protected. It originates from the increase in humans interests in catching sight of wild animals, which can be advantageous for zoo managers. They would set store by improving entertaining activities as well as visitor services, and gradually ignore caring animals. Besides, animals have their own feelings when being caged and the rights to live in where they belong to. To take panthers as an example, their instinct is running and being predators, but it becomes impossible when they are kept in the small space in zoos. As a result, they can lack their instinct, which will be detrimental for heredity.
To sum up, to keep wild faunas in zoos or not will continue to be argued. However, I totally suppose that animals should be in nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, i think, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62941665551 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571929824561 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1771310254 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295993461145 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113783213427 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559687014559 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201223745994 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018063348723 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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