People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that the age group is the most influential factor that causes distinguished shopping habits. I completely disagree with this idea and reasons for my view will be taken into account.
The age group seems not to affect celebrities’ shopping style. Famous people have a huge amount of money and they always wear trendy, exorbitant and stylish costumes no matter how old they are. Since celebrities want to be gorgeous and luxurious in pubic regardless of the age, they tend to buy overpriced products of renowned brands when going shopping, which is the same shopping habits of most prominent stars. Moreover, the older famous people are, the more they attempt to imitate younger celebrities styles to look more energetic and modern.
In addition, I believe that shopping habits seem to be influenced more by location than the age, which means inhabitants in cities and towns have different shopping styles. First of all, the higher expenditure on shopping in big cities than in towns originates from the higher number of commercial places in cities. Besides, people living in towns can provide themselves with food by planting and breeding so they only go shopping to buy other products such as clothes, groceries and equipment, which are unnecessary to buy daily. As a result, inhabitants in cities have a tendency to go shopping more frequently than those in the countryside.
In summary, from my individual perspective, a person’s shopping habits are not affected most by how old they are, but by their popularity and location.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: PUBIC_X[1]
Message: Did you mean 'public'?
Suggestion: public
...es want to be gorgeous and luxurious in pubic regardless of the age, they tend to buy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, in addition, in summary, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1062992126 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77473041902 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586614173228 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2662077922 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.909090909 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282657072454 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109073478237 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433879842895 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153418159158 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04300355705 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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