Undoubtedly, zoos are one of the favorite places for families to spend their leisure time. While some people questioned their value and the quality of care provided to the animals, others contend that they help in preserving the endangered species. Personally, I feel zoos are cruel, unnecessary and are ought to be phased out.
Although zoos have made great improvements over years, there can be no doubt that the captive animals suffer. First of all, these animals are shifted away from their habitats and undergo huge stress. Many animals like Elephants, adore to be in groups, which when ostracized, develop a lot of stress. In addition to that, animals lose their hunting skills and lack physical exertions. Tigers, for example, are known to chase and hunt their preys, whereas in zoos they are fed without any efforts of their own.
In terms of conservation, while zoos can aid in preserving the endangered species, this effort is futile. The mountain gorillas, for instance, has been successfully bred in captivity, but still the characteristics of the animal have changed a lot, as it is being grown in a different environment than their natural habitat. Now, even if they are introduced to the wilderness, they lack the skill of surviving as these animals are grown in an artificial environment. Hence, zoos have affected detrimentally on the livelihood of these animals.
In conclusion, zoos may be helpful in preserving the animals, but it affects the animals’ livelihood and freedom. Efforts should instead be made to protect the wilderness areas to ensure the long-term survival of the species
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, so, still, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15589353612 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81481839392 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604562737643 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4558021473 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8571428571 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207101894754 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717770702417 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335624617652 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13372258064 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345541228745 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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