There are two perspectives about working environment. Some people prefer to dedicate their whole life for one corporation until they retire, while others believe that changing company is better than being at same state. In this essay, I will discuss both aspects and give my opinion.
On the one hand, working at identical industries allows to financial stability and increases the chances of promotions. Moreover, it makes you more comfortable and familiar due to that you know people surrounding you, how the company operates and how to address problems easily. However, devoting your throughout life for one organization would reduce your creativity, and restrict fresh ideas and making new friendship. From my view, reason of this is that same places give same feelings every single moment, which cannot refresh your brain.
On the other hand, people who change their industry are able to study different skills which support them to develop. Admittedly, this kind of working environment enables opportunity to exchange knowledge and aids to think out of the box. Furthermore, altering their company requires essential ability of human that is adapting for new situation, which proves that it can flourish people by all sides.
In my opinion, the former statement is more suitable for patient people who want to be leadership, whereas the latter one properly matches with curious people whose desire is tend to attempt something new. To conclude, everyone has to be at their appropriate area like everyone is unique. As a consequence, every person would be happy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...hes with curious people whose desire is tend to attempt something new. To conclude, ...
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Line 4, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke everyone is unique. As a consequence, every person would be happy. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, as to, kind of, you know, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45019920319 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66535353351 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669322709163 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9240432832 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.230769231 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330123819216 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946203481997 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512549981298 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189451583672 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838913117115 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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