Some people prefer to play team sports, while others prefer to play individual sports. Discuss the advantage of each. Then indicate which you prefer and why.
Sports playing important role for life is divided into two types- team and individual. Both sports have their own effective advantages. So I will consider benefits of each point and which one is better for me.
On the one hand, the most essential thing of playing team sports is how to cooperate with other members. By learning this ability, people not only achieve goals, but also support, motivate and respect others to make the best team. Furthermore, another advantage is high level of discipline. Because if your team practice, you have to practice with them and you must not late, and performance of each members affects dramatically on result. From my experience, in terms of dance sport, team members who can move like one person rather than who do special movement is able to win. Thus, we needed to feel each other and do simultaneously at every single moment. As a result, we made success and became the best adviser, friend and coach of others.
On the other hand, individual sports have also advantages. It makes people patient and independent because there are not many people to help when they face problems or are discouraged. Therefore, only one who encourages, puts requirements is yourself. Moreover, people who play individual sports decide everything, they do not have to wait whole team to practice or make strategy, plan.
In conclusion, I prefer to play team sports. Reason is that it helps more influential to develop myself, have friends and especially work with others than individual sports.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 541, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...ho can move like one person rather than who do special movement is able to win. Thu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0157480315 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67299640662 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633858267717 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8493329883 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.625 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2571031013 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864122228533 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112278017812 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163609090163 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895738680207 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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