In some societies, stress is now regarded as a major problem, and it is thought that people suffer from more stress than they did in the past.
However, others feel that the amount of stress people have today is exaggerated. They say that previous generations were under more preassure, but the ideea of suffering from stress did not exist.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Even if life is regarded nowadays as being much better and easier than it was in the past, stress is found everywhere because people tend to be very competitive with each other, they have a lot of problems, don't manage right their time, and at one moment all of these are overwhelming them, this is the point where stress takes its place.
Today everyone stresses over something, even if it is a minor problem or inconvenience , which is very harmful. People who tend to overanalyse and stress too much may experience headaches, minor problems or sleeping difficulties. These are pretty insignificant but if we speak over the years these are leading to serious illnesses. As an example, extreme stress can cause changes in the brain that can lead to depression.
Stress, in my opinion, is like a trend these days, because everyone is stressed, talking from teenagers to old ones, especially adults. Teenagers are almost always under pressure because of school, they tend to be stressed when they don't manage their time correctly for school and extracurricular activities, when parents don't agree with them and the list can go over to infinite. Talking about adults things are almost the same, just with some differences because they have the tendency to do everything perfectly, to be very competitive and when a trivial impediment happens, stress comes too.
A few years ago, back in time, people were under a lot of pressure too, or maybe more, but they tried to analyse and solve the problems without overthinking and overanalizing the situation, without getting stuck on a minor problem. People, at that moment, tried to make things easier and they were doing something for them not to impress others, there wasn't this useless competition between people.
As a conclusion, I can say that previous generations used to live a peaceful and balanced life and that's why there wasn't stress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98734177215 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7088407243 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598101265823 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8379955496 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.272727273 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7272727273 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28855479703 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103918754986 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540256831455 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151101666186 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369548253741 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.