In some societies, stress is now regarded as a major problem, and it is thought that people suffer from more stress than they did in the past. However, others feel that the amount of stress people have today is exaggerated. They say that previous generations were under more pressure, but the idea of suffering from stress did not exist. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether we are suffering from a greater amount of stress than our seniors years ago. In my point of view, however, young people nowadays are under more pressure than the previous generation because of the well-developed world we are living in.
Hundreds of years ago, predecessors only had two primary concerns in their life. Firstly, regarding the time when they were short of food and water source due to the damage of World War II. Not only the problem was searching for food and water to survive but also looking for where they could hide during the wars. Some parents even lost their children and they lost their motivation to live. Secondly, there were also marital traditions that some regions applied at the time. In Vietnam, for instance, teenagers aged 15 were obliged to get married to a man whom they had not known before. Therefore, those who almost reached this age would be in great concern and under the pressure of getting married.
When it comes to this day and age, I think stress has grown into an alarming problem. As more and more technological devices including novel smart robots have been introduced to the public, people have a lot to worry about in their future. Because this can make them stand a high chance of being made redundant. As a result, they are under high pressure of making ends meet and taking care of their family. Many parents even force their children to study day in and day out so that they can apply for a well-paid job in their future careers. This has led to an increase in the percentage of suicide in many developed countries such as Japan and America in the last few years. The proliferation of technology and artificial intelligence is likely to increase in the next few decades so the number of people who suffer from this pressure would go up accordingly.
In conclusion, although the previous generations may have experienced a shortage of food and water and might have been compiled to engage at a very young age, I think the amount of stress that today’s generation suffers is not to be overlooked.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e a lot to worry about in their future. Because this can make them stand a high chance ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74794520548 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51289786058 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572602739726 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.64016118 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.941176471 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1176470588 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242641885275 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665957250062 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584619125481 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157101997398 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503310368937 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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