Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much, why do people take part in dangerous sports Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
Despite that some certain sport are harmful, people still participate in them. There are many reasons people engaged in such dangerous sports.
Firstly,The rewards attached to such sport for whoever that becomes the winner.The prize given to the first people always attract individuals to take part in such sport unlike the prize given to less dangerous ones. For instance,people involved in bull fighting are rewarderansomely than those doing judo sport .Bull fighting is more dangerous and life threatening. However, Some of these dangers can be prevented if people involved are provided with extra padded equipment such as helmet to avoid fractures and head injuries.
Secondly, another point why people take dangerous sport despite they are aware . It help in bursting their economic of their nation during the sport as there will be inflation of goods and services However, this can be checked if government ensure there is price control of all product, again put hidden cameras around so offenders can be picked .
It is true that some sports are unsafe and individuals till love to take them due to prize given to winners and it's economic benefits to their nation while the dangers involved can be controlled by provide safety measures and using cameras to detect crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, as to, for instance, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17874396135 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59082846124 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.096977601 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.125 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355329237456 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180653974825 0.084324248473 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781868360247 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23105542946 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967981792449 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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