It is often argued that some education systems obligate pupils to study particular subjects in defined scope from fifteen years old, while some people considered that system which requiring pupils to study subjects extensively is more beneficial. In my opinion, I believe that learning just a specific course more essential for pupils because they will study it comprehensively for their chosen careers.
First of all, the system which necessitates students to study a certain subject in a finite range benefited them to be more focused and deeper on it. This is because the specialized education system guides pupils to mastering subjects that related to the profession they dreamed. For example, vocational school teach students more practical in a specific area.
On the other hand, other education systems which require pupils to learn the course in an unlimited range will make them smarter. Although, those systems require students to provide more time to study and it usually not necessary for their future. A key reason for this is that in this globalization era, the corporation prefers to choose an employee who has many skill and knowledge. For instance, A multitalented worker will be rewarded with big salary other than the ordinary worker.
In Conclusion, limited subjects education system obligate pupils to understand solely course that has relation to their career goals whereas unlimited subjects education system require pupils to comprehend knowledge widely to become more diligent and more skilful. I believe that a limited range of subjects system more essential than unlimited system due to the easiness to mastering for students.
- The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer compost 78
- The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000 The total budget was AED 315 billion Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- Some systems require students to speacialize in a limited range of subjects from the age of fifteen Other systems require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school What are the benefits of two education systems and what is better 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun skill seems to be countable; consider using: 'many skills'.
Suggestion: many skills
...n prefers to choose an employee who has many skill and knowledge. For instance, A multital...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39615384615 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7196931388 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519230769231 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.933384071 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.545454545 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383896982993 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158236979516 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10170318398 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256345206653 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460055787006 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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