Some teacher think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school student. Do you think its advantages would outweigh its disadvantages?
It is true that several tutor think that go abroad to learn would be bring benefit for all youngest. While there are some drawbacks to international student exchange, I am of the opinion that the advantages will likely be more significant.
On the one hand, the idea of studying in other country is disadvantage to some extent. The first disadvantage of this is financial cost maybe to high. For example, they must a large amount of money to pay the bill in other country, pay fee for several service from school. Therefor, most of poor families will not have opportunity. The second disadvantage of this is all teenage still too young, they are not yet grown or develop, so they may be lack experience.
On the other hand, although international student exchange might be bring disadvantages, advantages of this would be popular. The main one is youngest school student will be learning foreign language such as English, UK. In addition, when student study at some develop countries will carry opportunity for a major in the future. Another advantage is teenage will be adding new friend from abroad to improve community skills. Moreover, the knowledge about new culture will been development by student.
In conclusion, while there are many disadvantages regarding studying abroad from teenage, I believe the benefits that result from this trend is significant.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun tutor seems to be countable; consider using: 'several tutors'.
Suggestion: several tutors
It is true that several tutor think that go abroad to learn would be ...
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Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun service seems to be countable; consider using: 'several services'.
Suggestion: several services
... the bill in other country, pay fee for several service from school. Therefor, most of poor fam...
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the youngest'.
Suggestion: is the youngest
... of this would be popular. The main one is youngest school student will be learning foreign...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[4]
Message: Did you mean 'will be' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: will be; has been
...reover, the knowledge about new culture will been development by student. In conclusion,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, still, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07555555556 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83820148233 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604444444444 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.328796481 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8461538462 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294305157044 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982382039712 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711266850252 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168506923108 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105921821332 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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