The author of this topic makes an assertion that online courses are now offered by
some universities in order to make there courses available towards more number of people.
In this essay I will try to highlight both pros and cons of this development and try to
provide sound reasoning for my claims.
On one hand, there are two main positive sides of this development.First of all,
this offer will be cost effective. In other words, as the online courses require
less amount, more number of people can enroll in these online courses. For instance, according to
Indian Institute of Management, which is a global institute, 30% more people enrolled
for there Post Graduate Diploma course in 2019 as compared to last year,2018. Secondly,
the online course will be effective. In other words, people can access these course from
their houses and so that they would not have to leave their families. For example,
as per U.S Time report, more than 40% U.S citizen had enrolled for online courses after marrige.
Therefore, it is clear that online course has certain benefits which has positive impacts.
On the other hand, there are also some disadvantages of this offerings. Firstly,
over internet some topics may not be clear as compared to on campus study. It means, some people
may not understand some topics via online courses. They will not get the opportunity to talk or
discuss their problems with their peers as well as proffesors. For instance, as per a recent poll
on facebook about the online courses, 10% more people are interested to attent university on campus study
rather than online study. Moreover, in online courses people may have less focus towards their study. In other words,
as there will be no study environment, people may loose their focus from their study . In addition,
as they can access the courses from anytime, they may be unable to concentrate in their study.
For example, 30% more people, who opted the online courses in 2017, failed in their courses as compared to classroom or on capus
study in University of Waterloo, which is the most popular university in Canada.
To conclude, it can be reiterated that although there are some negative development of online
course study, the positive effects for the same can not be denied. Thus, online course study has
equal positive and negative impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05089058524 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50923851501 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4631043257 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4394693798 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.65 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.38176352705 593% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392297310038 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124991332417 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597261668799 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110428555304 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529008057333 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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