Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many busy parents believe that child cares center arrange superior care for kid who are still little ones to go to school. Another employed parents vision is relatives like grandparents will be good carers for their child. Nowadays many busy parents have many good opportunities to choose the best childcare center with the good qualified tutors in their city. Likewise most childcare centers provide additional care support for the kid. They will learn how to socialize with friends and people. The care center helps to become more independent from young ages. Although parents will be more confident that their kid is in a good hand and is in safe environment.
On the other hand some other working parents think that grandparents are best cares for their children. Even though the grandparents are old and they are not so active parents sure that they are more responsible. Also essentially moment for parents that their kids will be surrounded with love and support. In addition some parents believe that grandparents can provide good up-bringing and teach them being a good person from the young ages.
In my opinion, both methods of childcare are good for kids and parents. But I might choose childcare center because there the kid can become more independent and socialized and it is a good to start from young ages.
To sum up I think childcare centers are the better option.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...be surrounded with love and support. In addition some parents believe that grandparents ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, so, still, i think, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96137339056 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50986008933 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510729613734 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3186136234 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.5714285714 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386899248899 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147197140819 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121654621105 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222669041441 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121227426345 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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