Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in countryside? What problems does his cause? What can be done to solve this problem?
Trending of youth's migration to the urban areas are significantly increasing over the period of time insearch of lucratic job. In reality, this trend is causing a dense population in city area and coutryside is depriving from to be develop. so, the root of this problem lies in lack of opportunities in countryside which can be solved by addressing this problem by government from ground level.
Many youth overlook the opportunity of countryside area and often get captivated by the luscious opportunities in urban areas. One of them is, since many youth are travelling to cities areas so, lack of active and skilled man power. For example,In Nepal Majority of youth are travelling to big developed countries like USA, Australia for higher education and jobs, where only lions share of adult living inside country arent enough to create opportunity. thatswhy, underdeveloped country remain forever behind. It requires skilled and fresh mind inorder to develop country. Another reason is, inaccessible to facilities like hospital, transportation. For example, countryside areas lacks accessible to road and during an emergency of health issue it can leads to the death of a person.
Different awareness and campainge programmes in the rural areas from different government level by encouraging youth to stay. Provining accessible resources and manpower inorder to develop countryside area. By provind accessible to all sorts of facilities like infrastructure, employment, education, health etc. Moreover, government should equally treat every part of country side equally so that youth wont migrate and it will balance the population of cities automatically.
In conclusion, a likely reason to migrate is lack of facilities so, proving them all sorts of need in rural areas wont create a situation to travel to city areas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...s are significantly increasing over the period of time insearch of lucratic job. In reality, t...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'overlooks'.
Suggestion: overlooks
...rnment from ground level. Many youth overlook the opportunity of countryside area and...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun youth seems to be countable; consider using: 'many youths'.
Suggestion: many youths
...s in urban areas. One of them is, since many youth are travelling to cities areas so, lack...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , In
...ctive and skilled man power. For example,In Nepal Majority of youth are travelling ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...ns share of adult living inside country arent enough to create opportunity. thatswhy,...
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Suggestion: Thatswhy
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4350877193 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04097390889 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568421052632 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3078663555 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.266666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123520708316 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418129782956 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636110459788 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796141883716 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725582096883 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.