There has been a significant rise in the movement of young people to cities from their rural areas in
recent decades leaving their grandparents and other elderly live alone. As a result, it has certain
ramifications to the society and country which will be discussed in this essay with some viable solutions
to it.
Fundamentally, there are some predominant factors which have triggered the issue, particularly, search
for jobs and higher studies due to lack of job opportunities and good educational institutions in
countryside because of which population growth in cities rise exponentially. This hits the infrastructure
of that particular city adversely and lowers the overall development of it widening the gap between rich
and poor. Another point to consider is, this trend widens the communication gap between the elder
people and the young people making the latter disconnected to the roots of their culture and traditions
as they gradually make distance with their relatives living in the countryside because of numerous
personal reasons. For instance, shocking facts were revealed in a recent survey conducted in India
where 40% more people were admitted to old age homes as compared to the data received one year
back which was majorly due to migration of their children to nearby cities.
Nevertheless, there are potential ways to improve the scenario. Chiefly, rural areas should be given
emphasis on the economic front by the countries which includes necessary facilities to be set up such as
hospitals, schools and colleges and infrastructure which in turn shall devoid any person moving to
another city or town and increasing the employment opportunities for the rural people. Entering into
memorandum and contracts with big business houses to increase their investment options to
countryside can solve the problem to a great extent. To illustrate, a recent contract has been signed by
the Indian government with Reliance Industries to set up their lucrative project of textile in a small
village of Rajasthan which will generate impressive employment opportunities to the native people.
In conclusion, old people are the ones whose experience can certainly help a country flourish and
develop. Therefore, leaving them could have consequences for the development of a nation. Thus, there
becomes an urgent need to implement some effective measures to cease this trend so that country can
prosper with balanced regional growth.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2111.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48311688312 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96302052629 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587012987013 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.3495825183 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.384615385 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6153846154 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239625138257 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768912080281 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484507564922 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548848012344 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541564042665 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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