Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Seema Sharma, part time employee of your company and I am writing in regard to your letter
which asked me to become a full time employee of your company.
Firstly, I am glad that you considered me amongst other employees for this post. However, I wish to
inform you that I will be unable to provide my service to the company as a full time employee because
of my study commitments. As I had initially informed you about my pursuance of an MBA degree which
requires a great deal of hard work and time which will be impossible if I join the company as full time.
Being in a part time job, it gives me sufficient time to study with simultaneously fulfilling my financial
needs as well.
I apologize to decline this exciting offer and hope to offer my services as part time employee only.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Seema Sharma
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Seema Sharma, part time employee of your company and I am writi...
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Line 4, column 28, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...your letter which asked me to become a full time employee of your company. Firstly, I...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... provide my service to the company as a full time employee because of my study commitmen...
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Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... be impossible if I join the company as full time. Being in a part time job, it gives me...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 12, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...n the company as full time. Being in a part time job, it gives me sufficient time to stu...
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Line 13, column 77, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... offer and hope to offer my services as part time employee only. Looking forward to hear...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, well, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68553459119 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61792405613 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3241141207 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299187599686 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123605452695 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601797513349 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127703922233 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634971315787 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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