In recent decades, museums have become increasingly popular due to their vast collections and dynamic creativity of art forms. However, there has been some disagreement about whether access to these museums should chargable or kept free. I am of the belief that accepting minimal entry fees are helpful to maintain and provide a better experience at the museum. This essay will iterate the benefits and drawbacks for the same.
First of all, it is an undeniable fact that excellent customer service comes for a cost. Having entry fees for a museum helps the staff to well maintain the art presented in the museum as well as the facilities provided by the museum. Every art comes with hidden maintenance cost which has to be bared by the museum owners in order to preserve its originality. Moreover, other facilities such as lights and toilets are also to be maintained. Furthermore, not all guides do voluntary work and need to be paid. They are the key members who help to convey the knowledge and make an impression about the art in the minds of the visitors.
On the other hand, having entry charges can divert the interest of some people as they may not find it worth visiting. More number of people tend to visit museums that are free of cost. This is more like entertainment aspect than some addition to knowledge.
In conclusion, charging the museums are definitely beneficial in order to maintain the facilities and spread the knowledge of the art. In my opinion, the benefits of having a visit to paid museums are higher than the one those are free. However, government can play a vital role to provide funds to museums and make the free to public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80902777778 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59037784659 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1174480712 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.5625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249447092414 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077462243956 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05193303798 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152751258447 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151352930053 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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