Sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. Maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining.What do you think are the main reasons for long distance relationships? What can be done to help couples feel closer?
Since the beginning of 21st century travelling has become more convenient, individuals have started to form friendship and love affairs with no regard of space. An opinion exists that happy marriages are unlikely to support in proper manner in case wife and husband live in different geographies. This essay will examine the reasons for controversial topic of distanced relationships and reveal appropriate solutions for those who experience particular situation to feel connected and unite
I am convinced that two key aspects of living separately are considered to be the permanent contracted employment and outbreak of hostilities might force lovers to disjoin. People might have exciting, perspective and well-paid jobs in their home countries, therefore the engagement does not obligate loved ones to consider moving in together. For example, famous American female singer Madonna tied the knot with British movie director Guy Richie and they have been spending 10 years in different states due to their show business projects. In addition, unfortunate events of current world causes tragic situations which force young athletic males to fight the war on the territories of distant nations. For instance, my cousin born a baby in 2002 right before President Bush approved of military action against Iraq which resulted in young father to leave for a war. Thus, both professional obligation and unpredictable incidents could be a reasonable explanations of legally bonded adults to live apart
In my opinion, families trapped in these situations should remain positive because each circumstances could be amended or mechanism could be found to ease suffering and hurt. In the period of technological progress folks might organize live video chats and conferences at zero cost even at hot and troubled parts of the world. Moreover, even the intense workload does not eliminate the periods of vacations and public holidays that could be used as romantic gateways for couples. For example, my brother who lives in Prague and his wife resides in Chicago have a planned schedule of day-offs for their future meetings. Hence, the enchantment trio of advanced technologies, spirit of positivity and quality time on vacations enable siblings to enjoy the environment.
Given all of the above, the key reasons why soulmates exist remotely from one another hides in professional obligations and unforeseeable events that challenged couples to inhabit connected. The solution to that is focusing on positive outcome, power of unlimited technological solutions that reconstruct virtual reality and conducting real physical meeting within each possible situation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 954, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'explanation'?
Suggestion: explanation
...ictable incidents could be a reasonable explanations of legally bonded adults to live apart ...
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Line 3, column 699, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d technologies, spirit of positivity and quality time on vacations enable siblin...
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Line 3, column 726, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ositivity and quality time on vacations enable siblings to enjoy the environment...
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Line 4, column 7, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...blings to enjoy the environment. Given all of the above, the key reasons why soulmates ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2252.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51960784314 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91126951622 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 176.041082164 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678921568627 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.2549161492 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.857142857 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1428571429 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135240513543 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371766434307 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348335529114 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758784634527 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234350396823 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.0 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 78.4519038076 195% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 954, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'explanation'?
Suggestion: explanation
...ictable incidents could be a reasonable explanations of legally bonded adults to live apart ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 699, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d technologies, spirit of positivity and quality time on vacations enable siblin...
^^
Line 3, column 726, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ositivity and quality time on vacations enable siblings to enjoy the environment...
^^
Line 4, column 7, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...blings to enjoy the environment. Given all of the above, the key reasons why soulmates ex...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2252.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51960784314 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91126951622 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 176.041082164 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678921568627 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.2549161492 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.857142857 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1428571429 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135240513543 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371766434307 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348335529114 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758784634527 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234350396823 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.0 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 78.4519038076 195% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.