In some parts of the world, the rate of divorce has increased dramatically over the past few decades.
Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Strong and stable families had always been a crucial element for building healthy society as well as powerful country. Unfortunately, over the following period of history divorce level has grown critically in some areas of the planet. This essay will describe the main reasons for this phenomenon and propose some possible solutions how to avoid them.
To commence with, I am convinced that the level of poverty as well as mutual misunderstandings of partners are the main reasons for growing rate of divorces. Families which are struggling for every penny to earn do not possess healthy and positive aura in their homes. For instance, according to Russian statistics, every third marriage is disintegrating on the grounds that people balance on the edge of destitution. Besides that, accumulated and unsolved hard feeling slowly destroy the atmosphere of love and happiness between beloved ones. For example, Demi Moore initiated divorce process due to the fact that she was not able to forgive Ashton Kutcher after cheating. Hence, loving family is a fragile phenomenon which may be spoiled by the lack of money as well as claims and bitterness.
As for the measures that should be taken, I propose family funds planning and the consultation of psychologist. The former solution will assist individuals to understand how to earn more money, spend them in the best ways and invest funds to multiply it. For example, my sister and her husband reorganized the sources of incomes and spendings and bought a larger apartment. In addition, sometimes couple might need the participation of third person to judge the situation objectively. For instance, in the USA family ought to complete the psychology course before they are finally allowed to divorce. Thus, solutions as family budget development and assistance of specialist might save the inner peace and harmony in the couple.
To conclude, I think that family is a complex phenomenon which may be disturbed by low level of incomes and bunch of mutual claims. However, the former problem should be solved by funds planning whereas the latter might disappear after the session with specialist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, hence, however, may, so, third, thus, well, whereas, as for, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21613832853 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78994091625 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596541786744 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 13.2774492068 49.4020404114 27% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.470588235 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166512386782 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499674681687 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603662421379 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102891327018 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849297575947 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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