One of the most contemporary issues that receive concerns from various parts of the world is an alarming rate of famine. It is the fact that starvation disasters have been existing in several nations although a multitude of cutting-edge inventions is applied to agriculture. In the following paragraphs, the causes would be analyzed with some plausible methods being suggested.
First and foremost, widespread starvation could be attributed to some factors that should be taken into consideration. A justification is overpopulation has been happened complicated around the world which could lead to the production of foodstuffs do not cater adequately for enormous demands. Another trigger is the lack of financial support for poverty people in some nations, especially the developed nations, which might cause those who are struggling financially can not afford their daily basic needs. Moreover, there is an industrialized world, agricultural fields seem less important than modern industries, which could be associated with the fact that most investments often flow into new areas, and as a result, agricultural advances do not have opportunities to be gotten into gear.
To avoid this phenomenon worsening, some reasonable steps should be implemented. To begin with, it is high time governments launched a nationwide birth-control policy to put a curb on the number of children in a family. Besides, it would be a worthwhile idea if local authorities reconstructed investment structures with the aim of suitably distributing them among economic sectors. Additionally, it is beneficial for the young generation to be heightened their awareness of sustainable development to balance economic growth and social improvement. Last but not least, it is advisable for volunteer organizations to raise a humanitarian campaign in order to attract public attention to some current disasters including starvation so that donors could donate to patients to minimize the famine’s damage.
In conclusion, the prevalence of hunger could be provoked by numerous reasons which require immediate attention. Only when governments and the whole society make concerted efforts could this problem be efficiently handled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67469879518 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24926714383 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647590361446 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3814661111 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.571428571 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147978734872 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481307934825 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406591297102 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852523385511 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315745051736 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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