Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than others sources such as internet and tv. to what extent do you agree or disagree.
Education plays a vital role in individuals life. Some people reckon that, pupils can gain more knowledge from academic topics with the help of tutor rather than from other sources like television and internet. I strongly agree with the given statement and would like to disclose my views in the forthcoming paragraphs.
There are abundant of reasons that, students can gain more information from lessons, which are teaches by their trainers. The first key point probably that, students can give more concentration on their study due to the fear of punishment, which would be given to their tutors in the form of fine, if they give less focus on their study. Another thing may be that, teachers can make dull and boring subjects interesting by using new and simple method of teaching, it would ultimately help to create students interest in boring subjects such as Mathematics, science and History.
The third main fact might be that, teachers can encourage to students to achieve good scores from their studies and they can also learn from their trainers how to compete with someones. As a result, it can be useful for their rest of life and also help to get good job. Apart from this, internet is an ocean of knowledge. There is no any authentication that, given information on the display of internet is true or false. That is why, learning from teacher is a best way instead of internet. The another obvious fact is probably that, there are numerous educative programs are telecasted on television. But students fail to understand some topic, which they can only understand with the help of tutors.
In crux, it can be confidently conveyed that, learners can learn far more information from topics, if it is teaches by teachers instead of studying on internet or television by students
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, third, another thing, apart from, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95666666667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62355780488 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543333333333 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.776144214 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202442119292 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790860146779 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060797000546 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146309200551 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444125299571 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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