It is often considered that studying in a foreign country has a beneficial effect on students who want to catch their dreams, while some people argue that there are also many obscures and they prefer to study at home, although it can be highly motivational. This essay will agree with studying abroad and will suggest some reasons.
As a matter of fact, there are several factors why studying helps to inspire dreams. The primary reason for education in a foreign country's universities can help to open doors for future career. Knowledge which is acquired from the foreign universities may be usefull and cognitive process with advance technologies can help to obtain essential qualities. For example, the number of students who want to study abroad has been increasing sharply, according to the latest allegations.
Undoubtedly, the second reason would be that If someone study in oversea, they may learn several cultures which they have not faced before and it would be essential to adopt to unusual situation. Take an example of today's job offer conditions. Nowadays, the modern companies require high quality cadres.
It may be true that although study at home has some adventageous, it does not give opportunites that mentioned above. For instance, they do not face to foreign cultures and can not learn how to adopt abnormal situations. It may be difficult for those who prefer to educate at home to communicate with people who have not met them yet.
In conclusion, by analysing above mentioned facts and allegations, I completely agree that the studying abroad for multitude of reasons that above mentioned. It is my fervent hope that although studying at home is comfortable due to many technological leaps, it would be better study in a foreign country in order to obtain many usefull experiences and knowledges.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'studies'.
Suggestion: studies
... second reason would be that If someone study in oversea, they may learn several cult...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...ced before and it would be essential to adopt to unusual situation. Take an example of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78675239103 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7784738533 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.071428571 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362779596875 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114480655831 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645569454226 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200284346906 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737662983564 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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