Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The exorbitant salary of athletes has sparked major controversy in some countries. While some people agree that this phenomenon is fully fair, others reject this notion, believing that the extravagant earnings of sportsmen are inequitable compared to other professionals. This essay will try to discuss both sides of the argument as provide my opinion.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why sports professionals deserve a high salary. Since sports require a lot of physical strengths, they have to endure rigorous practice to make sure they can be in the peak of condition all the time. For example, a soccer player needs to be trained at least 5 years before becoming a real athlete. Besides, in some extreme sports like ice-skating or wrestling, the athletes have a high probability of injury, even sustained life-threatening injuries all too often. Another feasible explanation is that though sportsmen spend all their childhood and adolescence to practice, they only have 10 years to shine in their career. Last but not least, should sports-persons winning an international competition, it will bring reputation and honor to its countries and people.
On the other hand, in terms of other occupations such as the teacher, doctor, fire worker, their roles in the society are incontrovertible. For instance, America is always considered as a top-level country regarded to techno-scientific, thanks to the significant invents of its inventors. Other examples include construction workers and doctors, who make home to protect us and save our lives. Yet all their contribution and non-stop efforts are being neglected by the public, and their payment is far behind from sports celebrities.
In conclusion, after all the aforementioned arguments are discussed, I believe that every single job has its own importance, and we should pay them the respect they deserve. And the government should make sure those who contribute equally to society gain better monetary prizes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, while, after all, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10172794147 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663461538462 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8864771455 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160098263036 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484520236045 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672539175133 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981585571288 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100723808002 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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