Accomplished sports celebrities are paid much more money than the people who are engaged in other important professions. For some people it is correct while the rest have a completely different opinion. In this essay both the point of views will be discussed.
Firstly, the famous sports personalities are admired or followed by lots of people. They act as a motivation for others. They in order to reach the position they are in today undergo a lot of hard work, sacrifices and also requires lots of determination as well. They struggle more than any other person to become successful in their profession. For example, Yuvraj Singh diagnosed with cancer risked his life to play world cup in order to lift the pride of his nation and also ended up on the winning side. So for surely, for these reasons sports celebrities are paid a lot more than others.
Secondly, a large number of people do not agree with this and point it as an unfair practice. As per them, people who risk or spend a large extent of their life toward the nation should be paid higher and it is correct as well. For instance, the soldiers or the army men who perform national duties without taking care of their life should necessarily be paid higher, similar goes for the politicians, scientists or country representatives in other nations. So these professions are for surely needed to be paid higher than they are in various countries.
Overall, in my opinion, a nation should of course pay sport celebrities higher but should also similar wages to the soldiers, politicians and scientists.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...requires lots of determination as well. They struggle more than any other person to ...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...id a lot more than others. Secondly, a large number of people do not agree with this and point...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85873605948 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68822847334 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557620817844 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8863450351 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198872980431 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787730426129 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787982299854 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138640425079 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11769095908 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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