The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashodown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the results of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The combination of tabular and pie charts illustrate the information about the amount of visitors in two years who visited to Ashdown museum during before and after the year its modifications. However, the pie charts represent the results of study of visitors respondents about Ashdown museum.
In overall, there are lots of transformation can be noticed in numbers of all visitors and their thoughts about museum and its refurbishment over the periods.
It can be seen from the information that during the year before modernised 74,000 visitors visit in the Ashdown museum. In contrast, after the refurbishment of museum the amount of visitors increases dramatically and reached to peak level at 92,000 in the next year.
The pie charts further prove that only 15% person very satisfied from Ashdown museum before transformation. Similarly, after its enhancement it rise gradually at more than a third. Likewise, people who are satisfied from museum was three in ten and experienced a growth of one in ten after variations. Interestingly, two fifth felt dissatisfied from museum before its refurbishment after this a drastic decrease can be observed people’s thought followed by very dissatisfied which 10 at first and after that it accounted for 5. Lastly, people who never give any responses about museum before and after the year of modernised remained constant at 5%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, likewise, similarly, so, third, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33181818182 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02207785232 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2335845258 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.3 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301357083781 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133820616339 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768317150078 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203248902056 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664245005353 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.