Take a look at the graphics and complete the task.The charts show where people get their news and how much they trust these sources.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should spen

Essay topics:

Take a look at the graphics and complete the task.
The charts show where people get their news and how much they trust these sources.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar charts illustrate proportions of people obtaining news through 6 sources and their levels of trust in these sources.

Regarding levels of trust in news sources, the largest proportion is recorded for local TV news (above a half). Following this, radio news and national network are voted to be reliable by slightly less than 50% while around 42% of users believe in newspapers. 4 out of 10 users think magazines are credible, which is significantly higher than the figure for online-only sources (around a quarter). Interestingly, the trust level of sources on the Internet is rather close to their distrust counterpart (20%), which is around two times the typical distrust figure for other media, aside for national network (15%).

Turning to how people obtain their news, the vast majority of users turned to local TV news (higher than 80%), which is followed by national network (72%) and newspapers (65%). Other sources were progressively less popular, with figures ranging from a shade below 60% (for radio news) to a little beneath 40% (for magazines).

In summary, the general trend is for popular sources of news to receive higher levels of credibility, with exceptions of radio news and magazines . Also, aside for online-only sources, there tends to be a big gap between figures of trust and distrust across the media.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, while, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05936073059 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64568883686 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557077625571 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7741310431 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 123.111111111 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11044371939 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600280542941 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056355181583 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973776763388 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563908267826 0.056905535591 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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