Teachers used to convey information, but now with wide resources of information, there is no role for teachers to play in modern education. Do you agree or disagree
It is irrefutable fact that use of technology has been increasing. Students have started to use e-materials from the different websites. However, I firmly believe that teachers play an important role to build great future of the students. All reasons of the same will be analysed in further paragraph.
From all of the reasons of disagreement, the foremost one is that understandable explanation. What I mean that teaches know very well that what is best way to explain theory and practical. Students do not need to find different method from internet which save time of students. Additionally, tutors help to instil high confidence in learner. Sometime students can not get good marks because of less confidence. This issue can only solve only by guide.
Adding more reasons, guide only knows about student’s level and talent to perform complex task. Teacher can give more focus on dull students. Furthermore, they can track all the internal and external activity of the students. They can punish to students if they do not work properly. Moreover, teachers can arrange extra lecture for weak topic of any subject. They can inform children’s parents about their study.
However, some people admit that internet is an ocean of knowledge. Internet resolve issue related time. What I mean, at any time students can get information at any place. Additionally, variety of data are available on world wide web. Furthermore, students can get bored to do self study . They might be get distraction during preparation of exam. Their concentrate might be destroy after watching entertaining advertisement.
To conclude, increasing use of internet never vanish important of teachers. Teachers always help to solve complex problems in easy method as well as they motivate students to get higher score. Thus, teachers play more important role for student’s carrier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, i mean, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3265993266 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93618024864 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599326599327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.9864479854 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.8461538462 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4230769231 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112359407067 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323977337453 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485452652742 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747377374539 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536272787765 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.45 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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