In this contemporary era, the majority of corporations sell products with the help of advertisements and trough ads they merely shows to the customers their products are new in a number of ways.It is a negative trend that why is it and this essay will highlight the valid reasons to substantiate the same in forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, businessman do these think to develop their business earn hefty money. To explicate it, companies advertise their products in the market to create consumers demand by which they can earn handsome money. To epitome, there is a one company Apple who make various electronic gadgets and every year this firm launch a new I-phone and create a demand in market. As a consequence, with the help of advertisement they divert the attention of the buyers towards the new product.
Nevertheless, this is a negative development because it misleads the public by framing the new products. Owing to the fact that sometimes people purchase these products by paying heavy amount and after that they regret. Moreover, sometimes individuals also get irritate from these advertising by watch again and again on TV and social media.To exemplify, a survey was conducted by Mumbai university in 2019 has revealed that soft drink companies like coca- cola and pepsi re-brand their bottles and cans to get the attention of the novelty.
To recapitulate, the reason business emphasis their products are new to increase the demand in the society which is a negative aspect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ir products are new in a number of ways.It is a negative trend that why is it and ...
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...e their products in the market to create consumers demand by which they can earn ...
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... by which they can earn handsome money. To epitome, there is a one company Apple w...
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... again and again on TV and social media.To exemplify, a survey was conducted by M...
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...ain on TV and social media.To exemplify, a survey was conducted by Mumbai univers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, nevertheless, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10931174089 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84134388916 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582995951417 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.583751805 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.222222222 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337950118377 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139606843495 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770340502504 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207751165622 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458819130533 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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