in their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.
Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In an economic dominant time, companies always publicise their produce that it is so perfect and have many new useful functions compared with other brands. There are many reasons to the companies which said that words; accordingly, I reckon that the idea brings many benefits combined some drawback for the brands.
On the one hand, there are many opinions, which concerned about the cause of why they need to introduce new things in their products. First, advertisements are used to attracting customers by their curious which make people want to come and discover the items to resolve their feeling what new things will have in the items. For example, a company introduce a new device on marketing and their employee said that the items have never had before and it have additive point; therefore, individuals will go to visit them; accordingly, even if they like it, Buying a product will become easily. Second, it seems as if businesses want that their polished brand becomes a phenomenon on cyber space. In a perspective, it make the number of selling produces be prompted higher than. Besides that, the brands will be risen the popular lever and the reliability by crowd effect. Taking apple which usually take place sharing new products events year by year, as a prime example, they will comment that their items are debut with an absolutely new appearance and change many aspects about software combined with devices attachment; however, like many people know that some information was be distortion, and they only an aim which creates a shocked mass media. This helps their new items become more reputed than and appeals the large number of customer to buy. The items are gradually renowned to many residents.
On the other hand, their advertising plan has its own advantages and disadvantages. In the advantage regard, studies have shown that if the scheme is successful, the advertisement revenue will be giant. Therefore, the companies are contributed for their nations where citizens will earn their living more easily rely on the brands and national economy will be enrichment by tax revenues. In addition, the companies become more increasingly reputation to create a new power-brand in their field; therefore, they will be broken through about currency and open variety of opportunities to collaborative with other famous brands. Accordingly, they will appeal talent people to work for them and expand their promising labor market. In contrast, if the publicity is only a stupid polish, the businesses will be decline amount of customers because their items do not have any profit and different compared with other products as they said. The brands will discredit and even lead to bankrupt by the lower benefit currency of the original break-even point.
In conclusion, businesses’ advertising helps the investors increase their asset; however, it also have some drawbacks. Accordingly, advertisement necessary for every new products become more popular than.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2505.0 1615.20841683 155% => OK
No of words: 480.0 315.596192385 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21875 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71423635541 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 790.2 506.74238477 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.3751268411 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230713455489 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806624283067 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541732536507 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158491202688 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562457905991 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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