There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
When compared to the past, there are many different types of music. Music is indeed something that we all enjoy throughout our lives, and this may be expressed in different ways. In my opinion, listening to international music is essential, but traditional music is more important than modern music these days.
In recent years, music has become an indispensable essential for everyone. First of all, the brain may be motivated by music since there are lots of things that we can listen to and pay more attention to in music. Besides, listening with focus is an enjoyable experience that allows people to become immersed in a new sound world. For example, anytime I am worried, stressed out, or nervous, I take the opportunity to listen to music alone. Because of this activity, I feel refreshed and have forgotten about my problems.
Moreover, an important consideration is that each country has its own traditional music, so each rhythm seems to have a different style. Traditional national music continues to play an essential part in society, even though we hear more and more international melodies. It is a cultural attribute of a nation, a part of our rich heritage, that has existed for thousands of years. As a result, we should attempt to maintain and expand it on a global scale. Should we try to promote our country's traditions through music we can show our sense of patriotism.
In conclusion, music has evolved into a platform that allows people to avoid apathy and stress. Furthermore, listening to traditional music rather than international music is essential for improving our cultural heritage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06343283582 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90198492152 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570895522388 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1942521615 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.4666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.486363764926 0.244688304435 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17370020157 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129861795473 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333809609633 0.151304729494 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108053854797 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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