There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere?
In contemporary era, music is becoming more and more popular in the world and people are walking with this trend. There are multiple types of music available nowadays. Thus, they are listening music by their choice. There are some reasond why music is necessary for everyone and importance of traditional music or international music over foreign songs that youngster always hear. I will explain both perspectives in ensuing paragraph.
To begin with, listening music while doing sports activities can boosts energy level and brings the passion of sports in mind. Music is an activity which including in our daily routine. Music make people to stress less and keep mind to active. Moreover, some students are listening music, when they solve some maths' problem because they do not boring with music. Therefore, music is important for students in their education and it also important for employees for relaxation.
Another issues of their essay is whether traditional music or popular world music has more importance. Traditional music is use ocassionally. Such as, in wedding, ring ceremony and so on. Some traditional music reminding our tradition. And culture which made by reality of our cultural stories. Furthermore, traditional music is easy to understand. Therefore, countrys' elder people and un-educated people can understand lyrics of traditional music. Beside this, international music is only use in some bachelors' party. It could not be use in family functions. Hence, popular world music has no importance to compare with traditional music.
To recapitulate, music is important for. Each and every person for relaxation and traditional music is most important rather than international music.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 310, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'maths'' or 'math's'?
Suggestion: maths'; math's
...e listening music, when they solve some maths problem because they do not boring with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85235055155 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563909774436 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5907597655 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6363636364 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0909090909 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.555794613053 0.244688304435 227% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1977780892 0.084324248473 235% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123252184637 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.401138138194 0.151304729494 265% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643238910873 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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