There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music?
Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Nowadays, the world has the majority of types of music. While there are some several reasons why music is very important to us, the modern worldwide music, in my opinion, can not overcome the role of traditional music.
We can not refuse the role of the music that affects the social life of the human. Firstly, it can strengthen the connection between different communities. Because we will understand clearly and know deeply about people and the culture of a nation when we listen to the traditional music of this country. Secondly, music is also the landmark in history that reminds us of several unforgettable periods in the past. For example, the song ” When Johnny comes marching home”, in 1863, in the United States, will remind Americans about the victory in the Civil War time.
Although modern music is becoming more and more popular all around the world, I think that traditional music always has an irreplaceable role in our society. Traditional music is a special characteristic of a nation, and it is the tool to identify the culture of one country. Moreover, because each nation has its wartime, and the music in this time emphasize some history invents that separate one nation with others. Besides, traditional songs also behalf of the belief of people in their ancestors. For example, the hymn ”Sunny Day” is the trust of the Vietnam community in the creators of the country.
In conclusion, in my viewpoint, music has a crucial role in our lives, and traditional music can never be replaced by international music.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98846153846 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76007835838 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0436752011 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420449216594 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161542541912 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125606616071 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304099564512 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923461949448 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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