there was a time when people only shopped out of necessity but these days shopping seems to have become a new form of leisure activity. People do not appreciate the value of money any more. To what extent do you agree with this view? give reasons and a relevant example or experience you have to support your answer.
In previous years individuals shop those things only which they seriously need while in this contemporary era people go for shopping without any necessity or emergence they just do not value their money. I am fully agree with statement because certainly, people are wasting their money on luxury items rather than on important things as they more follow their passion then needs.
To initiate with, this is modern era and there are many fashionable things which are growing rapidly and everybody is more interesting in showoff rather than satisfaction. People spend more money as compare to their need. While in past time people were more aware and they know how to spend their precious earning in right way on themselves as well as their family and kids. Men and women both think before use their money on anything as they were more disciplined and mature enough to understand the value of money.
Probing further, nowadays people are just looking towards their outfits and try to be with new trends. They always try to make themselves looking more beautiful so that they get chance to tount others or lough on them. further more they do not no the importance of their money in their life. According to me they do not learn the value till they start earning themselves rather than to depend on their parents.
In conclusion, people are more influenced by the new trends of fashion thus they are wasting their precious money on shopping then their necessities.so i opine that, people should change their living style to live happily without obstacles.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91254752852 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41021454433 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558935361217 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7313488686 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.454545455 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205539809802 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978346104462 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541489026176 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148243788845 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469691279117 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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