It is true that nowadays people are living in a society called" throw-away". This means people tend to get rid of things which used a few times and then buy another one. There are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon and several serious problems can happen.
One reason is owing to the businesses' advertisement strategies. Many advertisements with appealing content and the message about buying new items can help improve clients' appearance, reputation and even social status so that people will have a tendency to purchase the items although their things are still new and can be used for a long time. For example, teenagers are now willing to spend a great deal of money buying a new iPhone X just to show position their phones can be utilized. Furthermore, a manufactured company should also be responsible for these problems. This is because the low-quality mass production causes things easily be worn out so that people can only use them for short time and then throw away to buy new ones.
These lifestyles may have an adverse impact on people's finances. They can be drawn into a scam or have a bid dept by following the trend. People may also face environmental consequences caused by this society. As many things are thrown away, a huge amount of hazardous can be discharged into the environment causing air and water pollution and affecting directly people's lives.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various factors that exert this society and many problems result from this.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'businesses'' or 'business's'?
Suggestion: businesses'; business's
...an happen. One reason is owing to the businesses advertisement strategies. Many advertis...
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Line 2, column 738, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me and then throw away to buy new ones. These lifestyles may have an adverse imp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, still, then, even so, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94901960784 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78576598414 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7831236096 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0769230769 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312545084842 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106566679382 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104948103151 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183334615819 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104057322078 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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