These days people in some countries are living in a “throwaway” society which means people use things in a short time then throw them away. What are its causes and what impacts can it have?
In modern society, people tend to buy things frequently and throw away their old items regardless of whether or not they still work. This essay will outline some factors for this phenomenon and a range of dire consequences that it could have on individuals and the environment.
There are several reasons leading to the throwaway society. First of all, we are living in a consumerist society in which new products are released into the market on a daily basis. Therefore, this allows people to make regular purchases in order to keep up with the cutting-edge technology. For example, many of today's teenagers spend nearly 1,500$ buying iPhone X to show that they are wealth and fashionable even though their old phones are still in good condition and perfectly functional. Another cause is the mass production of non-durable goods which are often used once and thrown away. This manufacturing industry is expanding in many countries with criteria cheaper and more convenient than durable ones, hence, this leads to the fact that consumer durables are being replaced gradually by other less durable goods.
Individuals living in a throwaway society could suffer a great deal. They could easily get into serious debt if they have an unhealthy buying habit. Many teens are being burdened with thousands of dollar in credit card debt for their unnecessary purchases. In terms of the environment, this practice inflicts severe damage to the environment. With the massive number of using disposable products will cause landfills to become overloaded with huge piles of garbage, only a small the proportion of which is disposed of properly to avoid harm to the environment. The rest of the garbage, usually non-recyclable and plastic items, is either buried underground or burnt. This can increase air and land pollution levels, and directly harm the lives of residents living in the throwaway society.
In conclusion, a throwaway culture which wreaks devastation on our environment and makes many people falling in debt status are two the two major problems which result from this society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19230769231 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7362833543 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603550295858 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3734792962 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.6875 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172265008962 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054693712235 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446106074028 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10682804026 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00991945625542 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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