These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Previously, some were spending a limited amount of money on sporting and cultural events. However, a new trend has been started among them in last years and they are spending more money on these types of activities than before. This trend has many benefits for the person and society. In this essay, it will be discussed why the pros of the new trend will overweight the cons.
An effect of spending more money on such activities is that the person will be healthier either physically or psychologically. As a result, the person will have a better relationship with others in society which brings happiness to him and others. Therefore, the positiveness will propagate into the society and thus, the society will become healthier and happier. In Denmark, one of the biggest expenditures for the people is the payment for sporting and cultural events. For many years, Denmark has been known as the happiest and healthiest country on the earth. If we consider the depression and sickness ratio among people of countries who pay almost nothing for sporting and cultural events and compare it with a country such as Denmark, it will be easy to conclude that these activities play a significant role in the health and happiness of people.
However, since more money has been spent on such activities, there will be less money for buying a new car or a new house. Although buying a new house or car will make a person or a family happy for a short period of time, the happiness and health gained by sporting and the cultural event lasts longer and has a bigger effect on the society. At the same time, Cultural events also increase the awareness of the community about their and other cultures and educate them on how to behave more properly n different places.
In summary, spending more money by some on sporting and cultural events will make the society and the people healthier and happier and even better educated, though it has very few drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, thus, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85163204748 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56048871459 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474777448071 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5027010191 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.785714286 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191422838022 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794184425454 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748607796811 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141419478438 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047220007638 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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