Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is certainly true that consumption of a product is affected by its advertisement. However, it is also a fact that the actual need is utmost important for the high sale of any item.
With the advancement in the field of information technology, different means of advertising has been invented. Furthermore, utilization of various products is directly proportional to the publicity of goods. For instance, product and taste really matter in case of soft drinks. As there are many good quality carbonated breavages available in the market but people prefer to use Pepsi because of its huge advertisement. In addition, advertising companies specially target a particular age individual to increase their sale. For example, many ads focus on children, which later on compel their parents to buy that object. Thus our needs and psychology is influenced by the advertisement to a greater extend.
On the other hand, actual requirement of a product is also necessary for it sale. This trend is much more common in the small villages where advertising is not frequent. Let us consider an example of our province, here most of the advertising agencies focus on main cities while ignoring small towns. As a result, in these rural areas people buy products according to their needs. Moreover, most of the inhabitant of these regions are illiterate and only understand local languages. Therefore, unfamiliar languages used by these companies have no influence on them.
In conclusion, both the real need and advertisement have impacts on the utilization of different products. However, it affects the purchasing habits of children and population living in metropolis, whereas, it has mild effects on villages.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'whereas', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262295081967 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.127868852459 0.155533422707 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108196721311 0.0946595960268 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0590163934426 0.0501214627716 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0459016393443 0.0437548338989 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.147540983607 0.122226691241 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0327868852459 0.0403226058552 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.06634177506 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0196721311475 0.0326793684256 60% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0885245901639 0.0861772015684 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.021408717616 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00655737704918 0.011925033212 55% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1730.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 316.048096192 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.36029411765 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382352941176 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.316176470588 0.28420135186 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.253676470588 0.203846283523 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.202205882353 0.137316102897 147% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06634177506 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.037074148 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613970588235 0.56093040696 109% => OK
Word variations: 67.1847658359 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.2928176399 49.517814964 43% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.764705882 127.492653851 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.05882352941 0.814263465372 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 47.6176470588 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.9014084507 1.69124875643 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423056918919 0.332605444948 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0864130797719 0.102741220458 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.05526729785 0.0668466124924 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.478569372378 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16190041535 0.148594505496 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161241423236 0.134430193775 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963376692203 0.0742795772207 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.32255931757 0.324371583561 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0604666051609 0.0638462369009 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288428424942 0.228012699653 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735401653027 0.058150111329 126% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.41683366733 234% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.