Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Commercial companies publicize their products through advertising on newspapers, TV and other electronic media to persuade people to buy their items. It is an effective and strong way for the companies to reach towards the public with new offers and benefits of their product but sometimes it misguides people to buy unnecessary things. So, I strongly agree with the statement about the power of advertising over social needs for the following two reasons.
Nowadays people are easily influenced by media and most often they buy popular consumer goods blindly only driven by advertising. Many high sold popular products are merely useful but still, people continue to buy them for show-off. TV commercials excite them by the luxury of their goods and especially young generations step in the traps to follow the trends. For example, many cosmetic and beauty products do not affect an individual or social development but they have a high demand in the market because of their attractive advertising. Thus it can be said that the high sales of popular consumer products are happening by advertising and these products fail to meet the social needs as they are void of practical usefulness.
Social need refers to the basic human needs that are food, education, clothes for all, in a word improvement of the community lifestyle. To ensure group development, it is necessary to spread the light of education among all but the high demanding products do not help to eradicate the darkness from society. Say, the latest model of smartphone or tabs attract people for their technological innovation but unfortunately they have no positive impact on community development. Rather these gadgets make people unsocial and unaware of society need whereas a classical book on literature encourages the young generation to eliminate poverty, hunger from society and to establish equal rights for all people. So, it is the fact that high demanding popular products do not necessarily meet social needs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun high seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many highs'.
Suggestion: Many highs
...ods blindly only driven by advertising. Many high sold popular products are merely useful...
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Line 5, column 543, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ecause of their attractive advertising. Thus it can be said that the high sales of p...
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Line 9, column 477, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...sitive impact on community development. Rather these gadgets make people unsocial and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, thus, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23676012461 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79262942883 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560747663551 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1625248663 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.307692308 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194867489727 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740589826386 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495384334888 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129287248122 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567915392401 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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