Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this modern age, advertisement has reached to a different new level and people use it for different purposes. Especially the market companies use it to increase the sales of their products and it is the main reason in the increment of sales of goods rather than the actual needs of the people. I completely agree with this statement and there are various reasons, some of which will be discussed in this essay.
One of the main reason is that advertisement introduces new products available in the market, helping normal to know about them. Moreover, they advertise by mentioning all the new features, their prices and benefits, making people familiar with the products and luring them to buy it. For instance, advertisements of smartphones mentioning their unique appearance and advanced characteristics within minimum range of price attracts people attention easily, tempting them to purchase it even if they already own a smartphone. In short, advertisement makes people crave for their products although they are not in need of them.
The other main reason is that, product companies offer various discounts, gifts and other stuffs free in the purchase of their goods, and advertise them through various means making sure that it reaches to every one of them in the society. Those advertisements reach people's ear quickly, grabbing their attention making them purchase the products for the gifts they can get . For illustration , we can see advertisement like, buy a rice cooker and get a chance to win a bike which make people more interested in buying the product for the bike rather then the real product, which is no use for them. So, advertisements are the backbone for the sales of a product.
This essay discussed why advertisement has great influence in the increment of the number of sales of a product and it is the main reason why people buy products even though if they are not in need of them. In my opinion, advertisements may be beneficial for market companies but not for the customers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, then, for instance, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98516320475 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85068410644 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477744807122 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6195650631 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.230769231 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123205783482 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604352879488 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299016918548 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917912298604 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125531902746 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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