The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and th year after it was refurbished.The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit,during the same two periods.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and the pie charts illustrate the information about the number of visitors and their reviews respectively during the year before and after the refurbishment of Ashdown Museum.Overall,the refurbishment of the museum increased the number of visitors and majority of them were very satisfied.
As we can see,before the refurbishment of the museum,the number of visitors were only 74000.Only 15% of the guests were highly satisfied and 10% of them were very dissatisfied.Majority(40%) of the people were dissatisfied with the museum and about one-third of the people were only satisfied.5% of the guests did not say anything about the museum.
After the museum was rebuilt and renovated,there was a great accomplishment.The number of visitors grew to 92000 and more than one-third of the people were highly satisfied.40% of them were satisfied which was the highest number of all.Even after the refurbishment,15% of the guests were dissatisfied with the museum.Not only that,5% of the visitors were highly dissatisfied while 5% of them did not give any response.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4251497006 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.66504244523 2.65546596893 138% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443113772455 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 22.4926829268 245% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9965985214 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 302.0 112.824112599 268% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.6666666667 22.9334400587 243% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322162646229 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.252621106217 0.103423049105 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701014002439 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252621106217 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701014002439 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 13.2329268293 242% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 61.2550243902 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 10.3012195122 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.4329268293 262% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.9970731707 218% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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