Training for works is more important than providing a broad-based education. Place your views.
Education is the key to one's bright future. While trainings about the work is also important to perform efficiently in the professional lifestyle. It is commonly argued that more emphasis should be given to trainings for the work rather than broad-based education. However, I believe that education should be provided followed by trainings.
To begin with, people possessing work experiences are not able to deal with the consequences of their work, rather they create problems, affecting the citizens and the society. Moreover, the nature is also disturbed. As they lack knowledge about the line of their work, they are unknown about all the negative effects and their solutions. As an illustration, we can take example of the contractors in Nepal. Even if they are skilled, their work of construction of bridges, roads and so on generates air pollution, degrading the environment and people's health. So, education must be provided to deal with such problems.
In order to learn any skill, one needs basic information about it. Without that they cannot excel in that field but with the help of education they can execute confidently as education strengthens their capabilities. Not only that education aids someone to explore more and create new things. For instance, engineers do not find any difficulty building bridges or roads . Matter of fact , we are amazed by their creative works and new inventions. Therefore, education is important for efficient work performance.
To summarize, to cope with the various problems and to do the tasks efficiently one should be provided with education backed up by essential trainings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ation is the key to ones bright future. While trainings about the work is also import...
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Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...any difficulty building bridges or roads . Matter of fact , we are amazed by their...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ilding bridges or roads . Matter of fact , we are amazed by their creative works a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28846153846 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92023646561 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7027370427 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8823529412 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206442785067 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680904486543 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983316537987 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135182106285 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119592161632 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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