Today, parents spend little free time with their children. Why is this the case? Who are more affected: parents or children?
In today's society, children and their parents seem to be less close than in the past. There are a number of reasons for this phenomenon, which is having a significant impact on family life, particularly teenagers.
There are two primary reasons why parents spend less time with their children nowadays. One reason is that both parents often work full time because many jobs require extra hours and also to support a family. Jobs like managers and executives usually have heavy workloads which cannot be dealt with during office hours.
Therefore, busy parents will have less contact with their kids. Furthermore, many adults tend to use new high-tech gadgets when they have free time rather than playing with their youngsters.
Moreover, this tendency could have negative consequences more on children in terms of shaping a child's personality. Due to working parents, kids may be left alone, and they can do whatever they want. Children spend more time with friends or surfing the Internet, and they will eventually become the main influences on teenagers' behaviour. Some of them join gangs and turn out to be more violent, as a result, juvenile delinquency is currently on the increase.
In conclusion, there are various reasons why there is a lack of closeness in families and this can have an adverse effect on children. Parents should be more involved with their youngsters' upbringing because young individuals need positive role models to look after and learn from.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... reason is that both parents often work full time because many jobs require extra hours a...
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Line 4, column 319, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teenagers'' or 'teenager's'?
Suggestion: teenagers'; teenager's
...ventually become the main influences on teenagers behaviour. Some of them join gangs and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12033195021 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56303933661 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639004149378 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.9770600425 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.9230769231 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374480479081 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133026715414 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106527677235 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201648959429 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292903527945 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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